Reviewed by Katie
Written in the first person, this modern romance is like reading a blog with
the comments turned off. At the end of the
novel I feel as conflicted and overwhelmed as Alexa and, surprisingly, as glad
to be serially unattached as Julian.
It’s rare to read a romance and not sigh just a bit for what you don’t
have at the end of the story. Stay
is the only exception to that experience in my ferocious reading history.
The first seventeen chapters interested and
amused me; made me roll my eyes and piqued my curiosity, oh and the sex was not
only hot it was well written. This is
extremely difficult to do in the first person.
By chapter nineteen, I was struggling to hang on to empathy for *any* of
the characters. By chapter twenty-three,
I was frustrated; by twenty-seven I jumped to the end of the book to get to the
Big Sekrit. There are forty chapters and
I couldn’t take it anymore!
It is chapter thirty-seven before you get
to that by the way and it’s viciously shoveled out there in a heated moment. Like Alexa, you want to run because you
realize, you’ve been manipulated as thoroughly as she has been. The characters barely get to react, never
mind cope, before the book is over.
Rather than being pieces of a puzzle put together so the bigger picture
allows perspective to bring closure, your left with ragged, torn images and sorrow
and anger and a bucket of doubt that even a baby step forward is genuinely
being made. Just like that annoying real life you might be trying to escape for
the space of a good book.
I went back to chapter twenty-seven and
read to the end, hoping it wouldn’t feel the same. Frankly, I closed the book despising Alexa’s
so-called friends, wanting to slap her parents and siblings, ready to file
charges against the best buddy and a formal complaint with the American
Psychological what-evah against the shrink!
I also wanted to ask our hero if Alexa was a 5 instead of an 8 on that
10 point scale of perfection, and was mediocre in banter and bed, would he
bother? Most of all I wanted to sit down
with a cup of tea and Alexa and promise her it would be perfectly OK to tell
her friends and the hottie new boyfriend to bug off and allow time for herself
to actually deal and heal before rejoining the so-called “real world, the one where I socialize and date and enjoy my life.”
But then, there wouldn’t be a romance would
there?
And yet … I read every word, some of them repeatedly. I rooted for Alexa to keep trying and to have
at least as much enthusiasm for her own life as she did her fashionable clothes
and shoe collection. I wanted Julian to
win her trust, despite the fact he’s described in terms so similar to her best
buddy I had to go back in several places and re-read to be sure whether it was
Julian or Luke Alexa was talking about. They
were even the same height!
See, I was paying attention and in my
humble opinion, that’s the mark of a good writer. I read this book in spite of the lush locale,
plot and twenty-something stereotypical angst because the author kept me
interested. She fed my frustration, eye
rolling and impatience like I was a monkey and she cornered the market on
peanuts. The intimate scenes and
emotional electricity were used in the story exactly as they are in life, to
keep the characters connected even when everything else is going to hell in a
hand basket. Ms. Wynne makes you want to believe with chemistry that good the
rest of it just has to work out. It will
be epic, any minute now, we’re sure of that.
But be warned, this book leaves you
hanging, clinging to hope but just not sure.
Personally, I don’t like being toyed with in that way. I want my story complete, not ending with a
cliff hanger and promises of the rest of the story in Book 2. I think many folks will like Stay precisely
because of that.
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